by Ingrid
It's not your time yet, son. You are way too young! Let go of these thoughts... the world is full of people that want to be a friend. Seek for them instead of seeking those dark corners of your mind! |
The pull of emotions here are clearly laid out. But as Ingrid said above ... it's not your time! Dream on ... and live on! |
by Chelsey
Very good. |
by Breeeezie
Wow amazing poem keep it up! 70/70 |
by jojo88
I have dark poems too I feel ur pain |
Dude, dont ever stop writing, ur very talented |