Withered rose of my heart

by FallingPieces   Aug 19, 2007


I'm like a rose that had falling and died..
with out water roses can never survive..
with out you i can never survive..
hopes are as down as the ground
what was i suppose to say?
when you said leaving me was your only cure!
how have i become your disease?
can't you feel no more for me?
and if i hold you close
and kissed you in every place will you stay for me?
what if i promised you to be a better half for you would this change your mind?
you never answered my questions but your actions did...
you took all your possessions and it was your time to go away
you looked at me and said you'll be OK
deep in my heart i knew it will never be the same
as he walked out the door
i felt the emptiness has taken control
i stayed laying in the ground thinking how my life is going to turn around
as the place going colder
as my leaves falling
you left me nothing more than a withered rose
just like the rose inside of my heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Wow this was powerful.
    I like how you compared your heart to a withered rose. I like how you asked questions instead of sentence after sentence.

    Good Job