Actually i disagree with you, i think this is a good poem :)
if this is how you've been feeling lately, dont let it get you down!
accepting you for who you are and yourself alone, is worth so much more than somebody just wanting you for your looks
never let it hold you down.
take care x.o.x

This poem is GREAT! I felt like you were writing about me I can relate so much! I realllly enjoyed it!=]

You are that hot friend, well you are that to me, this was a great poem. nice and had a great flow. you can show off you, i bet. anywhere in anything and you'd look good too.

5/5 David

I know what you mean about not writing much lately neither have I been and when I do I don't know where they come from.
This piece was great though i'm sure alot of people can relate to this in their own way. I don't think this was the best i've read of yours but it was still great which shows that all your work is up to a high standard. Loved it. Keep writing. ~mel

Hi!

You have commented on a few of my poems so i came to take a look at urs! =)

This poem abt ur hot best friend is so heart-felt and i can kind of relate to it cuz i have frenz ard me who are prettier and smarter than me. Haha..but whatever it is, we should still be proud of who we are! And i do believe that friendship is more than just grabbing attention from guys and being better than ur friend and stuff..so stay happy yah! =)

I loved this...filled with so much heartfelt and raw emotion throughout the entire piece. i thought the flow was shaky in one or two places but good for the most part. loved the ending..intense and hard hitting. i'm sure mamy people can relate to this piece and after all, thats what makes a good poem ^^

To tell you the truth, i think it is a great poem, it is such a truthful piece and i know alot of people could relate to that. but it was a great poem. i never felt like this coz at my school, it was basically who cares what people look like and stuff but i was also in the wrong crowd, loved this piece. nice work. 5/5

nikki