Missing mum

by stephanie   Aug 19, 2007


I shut you out when i was in doubt
not thinking you cared one bit
so i took things out on myself
instead of the rest of the world
how did i know it would end up like this?
broken hearts and many tears.
no only did i lose a mother but
a best friend too, for few words
to show you the pain i had felt for years
im sorry for the stupid mistakes
can we forget wht happened and put
things right. i miss the way we used to be
i miss us being in the same company.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marina

    This is a good way to show emotion and i see it.. nice job... i've lost my mother too. she walked out on my father and I about 3 years ago.. and we haven't talked since... i feel a bit of your pain... maybe you can read a few of my poems also
    -Marina

  • 17 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Indeed sad 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

    luzaN

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