ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

Indeed sad 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

This is a good way to show emotion and i see it.. nice job... i've lost my mother too. she walked out on my father and I about 3 years ago.. and we haven't talked since... i feel a bit of your pain... maybe you can read a few of my poems also
-Marina