by Lost Soul 691 Aug 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Take me back, just a short time |
by christopher
I just read your poem. i would need to read it a few times as it comes acros complex. on first impressions it is a bit too wordy. i think simplicity of words is more important. have you editited this poem or how long were you writing, before you were satisfied with the finish |
by Tom Swart
Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more. |
by Weeping Wolf
Beautifully penned..this is marvelous writing, I have felt that way so many often a time...you pinpointed the emotion. excellent. Oh yes, and of course thank you for the sweet comment on my poetry as well. I would love it if you would read more, for i am interested in more of yours as well. |
by janiL
Wow!!! |
by Gasttlee
Wonderful writing! So much feeling is captured here! 5/5 |