Wonderful poem deep, and well written , word choice was excellent , I wish sometimes I myself could go back in time at least to get away from things here sometimes,, great job,, your friend Tracy d,,, 5/5
Thank you very much

Wonderful writing! So much feeling is captured here! 5/5

Wow!!!
wish i could write something this great..>_<

Beautifully penned..this is marvelous writing, I have felt that way so many often a time...you pinpointed the emotion. excellent. Oh yes, and of course thank you for the sweet comment on my poetry as well. I would love it if you would read more, for i am interested in more of yours as well.
~Weeping Wolf~

Your poets heart unfurls itself willingly and lends its words to us to float and drift among our own words. Good work, I enjoyed your poem and look forward to more.

I just read your poem. i would need to read it a few times as it comes acros complex. on first impressions it is a bit too wordy. i think simplicity of words is more important. have you editited this poem or how long were you writing, before you were satisfied with the finish