It Happened One Night

by aDORKable x3   Aug 19, 2007


Laying in the grass, just staring at the stars,
I found my mind wandering, wondering how you are.
I hope that you are happy; I hope that someone cares -
Because you know, forever, I will always be there.

I promised you a thousand times that you have my heart -
No matter how far we may go, we're never that far apart.
Life is cruel and life plays tricks, but we'll make the most of it;
Together we stand, hand-in-hand, and that's something, I'll admit.

The grass was cold under my back, but I didn't really mind -
I just let the memories take me back, as my body began to unwind;
The tension just melted away, and for a time, I could smile -
It was something so unfamiliarly pleasant; I hadn't felt that in awhile.

The stars, they twinkled absently, playing to their own beat -
Just like the time when we danced, when our bodies did meet.
Slowly we moved, our eyes locked, dancing hand-in-hand -
No better moment I ever spent, no bigger prize I did land.

I tried to match each star, for each reason I loved you,
But when I reached a million, I realized stars were few.
They twinkled and they disappeared, making it hard to keep track -
But my reasons, they did grow, as I kept looking back.

Your eyes showed me you care; your hands, they held me tight;
Your words could quell my fears and tell me what's wrong or right.
You kind heart let me in to a place no one dared to go,
And in return, I loved you; I just wanted you to know.

Your smile brightened up my days when the world seemed so cruel -
Your laughter made me giggle. not feel like the fool.
You caring ways did catch me when I began to fall -
Your loving manner broke right through my defensive wall.

Your jokes could make me laugh, I still hold each moment in time;
Each precious gift you gave to me, I could never call them mine.
For they were shared between two souls, bonded at the heart -
A touch, a smile and a laugh; it was true love from the start.

So as I counted the memories, my phone began to ring -
Never had a phone call brought such joy as yours could bring.
"Honey, I'm so sorry, I never meant for us to fight.
Can you please forgive me? Without you, nothing's right?"

"I've been waiting for your call, hoping you still cared -"
"Babe, you know, I told you, I will always be there."
"Then let's move on from this, and put the past behind.
It's no use dwelling on mistakes, I have come to find."

"Honey, I'm so glad to hear it, because I have something to say -
Remember what I said? It was just the other day?
I told you that I loved you, and I would forever.
So don't ever be afraid because I'll stop next to never."

The call didn't last much longer; there was nothing left to say -
But I learned something special and I learned it that day:
No matter what happens, your heart may just be right.
So I guess you could say I fell in love; It Happened One Night.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    One of the best poems i have ever read.
    u are an amazing poet.
    and this is proof of it.
    everything in here was enjoyable to read, and didnt bore me, unlike other poems ive read.
    u must keep writing, b/c i guarantee others will keep reading.

    superb job,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Uhm..I`m crying? Lol, this poem made me cry! I`m mad atchu lol. This is beautiful, I don`t even KNOW how to explain it. My gosh, can I have your talent? Lol...I`m adding this to my faves and my contest nominations still don`t freaking work but if they did, this would be up there. I love this to pieces. I`m speechless for now lol.

    "I tried to match each star, for each reason I loved you,
    But when I reached a million, I realized stars were few."

    ^^ LOVE those lines.

    5.5
    heartchuu.
    <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This poem is so sweet!!!! every line was just so beautifully written...i could feel the passion and emotion put into the poem.... fantastic job on this one...

    theres only one minor mistake that i see...

    "You caring ways did catch me when I began to fall -"

    ^^you should be changed to your...

    but other than that i see no need for improvement...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Viola

    The grass was cold under my back, but I didn't really mind -
    I just let the memories take me back, as my body began to unwind;

    ^the imagery there was fabulous. this whole poem just took me away. it's such a nice story..and when told in verse is just beautiful.
    the rhyme was alos very good. what more can i say, i LOVED, once again. keep it up! =]
    --Viola

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Amazing! Beautiful! I loved these lines

    I tried to match each star, for each reason I loved you,
    But when I reached a million, I realized stars were few.

    WOW! Great writing there! My only suggestion is to watch your flow a bit. It's off in some places, but other than that, the story and rhyme were really good!
    Charisma*