Tis a very good poem mandy bear, love the flow, love the ending, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming babe!!!

Amazing! Beautiful! I loved these lines

I tried to match each star, for each reason I loved you,
But when I reached a million, I realized stars were few.

WOW! Great writing there! My only suggestion is to watch your flow a bit. It's off in some places, but other than that, the story and rhyme were really good!
Charisma*

The grass was cold under my back, but I didn't really mind -
I just let the memories take me back, as my body began to unwind;

^the imagery there was fabulous. this whole poem just took me away. it's such a nice story..and when told in verse is just beautiful.
the rhyme was alos very good. what more can i say, i LOVED, once again. keep it up! =]
--Viola

This poem is so sweet!!!! every line was just so beautifully written...i could feel the passion and emotion put into the poem.... fantastic job on this one...

theres only one minor mistake that i see...

"You caring ways did catch me when I began to fall -"

^^you should be changed to your...

but other than that i see no need for improvement...5/5

Uhm..I`m crying? Lol, this poem made me cry! I`m mad atchu lol. This is beautiful, I don`t even KNOW how to explain it. My gosh, can I have your talent? Lol...I`m adding this to my faves and my contest nominations still don`t freaking work but if they did, this would be up there. I love this to pieces. I`m speechless for now lol.

"I tried to match each star, for each reason I loved you,
But when I reached a million, I realized stars were few."

^^ LOVE those lines.

5.5
heartchuu.
<3

One of the best poems i have ever read.
u are an amazing poet.
and this is proof of it.
everything in here was enjoyable to read, and didnt bore me, unlike other poems ive read.
u must keep writing, b/c i guarantee others will keep reading.

superb job,
love ya lots,
sore