VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5

voteD excellenT!
luzaN

Wow, you should write a few more dark poems, cause you do it greatly. Another one with vivid imagery. The wording in this one is superb, and whole piece is so effective and captivating.
I like its structure and the flow is excellent.
My favorite stanza is:

-his shadow befalls
unnerving
no trace marks its wicked pang,
drawn to such insidious trap
lured by jargons of twisted tongue..-

5/5 from me

Wow great poem and very beautiful word choice. The flow and the way words are strung makes thi sone a unique and caliberated poem :)

Tc
Fsams