Nice poem, I like it a lot.

Nicely thaught through and portrayed through your words, and the flow is spot on.

My favourite part is the last 2 lines, very powerful with the subject in hand.

5/5 well done :)

Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina