Bad News Cellar

by ALEX   Aug 19, 2007


Listen up, now. Here's the deal.
You can almost believe her smiles are real.

But minuscule changes give it away;
The sparkle in her eyes is M.I.A.

Her confidante betrayed her trust.
His actions filled her with disgust.

Now she can't look him in the face.
A void of pain is in his place.

She'll call her fright overreaction.
Her panic? Nothing, just frustration.

What's worse is that she still wants more,
Although she's seen his rotten core.

She knows that what he did was wrong,
It's just... she's wanted him so long.

Her mind aches, and re-plays that night.
She really just can't stand the sight.

How dare he?! Well, that's anyone's guess...
Just vow, you'll never bes so helpless.

7/9/07

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It's alright. The rhyming was consistant besides the fact that overreaction and furstration do not rhyme. I checked to make sure. ^_^ I think I found a few typos in there. The last line you have bes and not be. If I saw any others I don't remember them so splah. I'll give it a four.