by Hatori Aug 19, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
We met that day, |
by Ashley Berry
Sweet. i love it its completely awesome |
by Jenni Marie
The depth and emotion you put into this are overwhelming. easily felt by the reader. i thought it flowed well throughout and again the repetition worked nicely. the ending was beautiful...full of emotion and holding so much power...beautiful. |
by Gasttlee
Good grammar or not, this is a great poem! 5/5 |
by Shauna
Great Poem!! And coming from the heart always makes the poem more meaningful! |
by Bre Monique
This poem reminds me so much of something that I've recently gone through and am still going through. It's so hard to lose a friend to someone else...especially when YOU knew them first. That hurts. This peom hit close to home so I have to give it a 5/5 |