Its good. =]

I like this, you're so good at this, making peoms flow 5/5

Your such a fantastic writer, youve got some pure talent=]

Really liked it. Different point of view of how to explain what love is. Never really thought about it from this perspective before. But now that i think about it there probably is no better way to explain what love is then by talking about who you love

Man u r in love and if ur dateing that lucky girl rit now I hopes she knows what she got cuz I'm geless 1000/10000