I love it, it has wonderful atmosphere. I like your choice of words in it, the piece is greatly written.
Keep up, 5/5 from me

I liked it 4/5

Wow! Beautiful Haiku. I really enjoyed... Atmosphere is great and you created incredible imagery with just few words. I am impressed! This poem is short but it is still powerful! 5/5

Very evocative and thoughtful imagery. Excellent.