Now this is cool. keep this up. =]

"I'm lost in the Darkness,
A place of vast plains,
Barren, free from life,
Dark skies and no sun."

A wonderful opening stanza that really got me interested.

"I feel so lost here.
So alone in this world.
It's so cold on these plains.
And I'm lost in this sea of Darkness."

Great descriptions here and in this whole poem, I thought the title was perfect too, really caught my eye. Keep writing, always and forever...