by Lonely Little Dreamer Aug 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
First meeting, within an instant |
by Bryan
Been here a time or two and it aint fun, tis another great poem, you have a way with words that captures the reader in pure tranquility, flawless grammer, another 5/5!!! keep up the great poems, and thank you for reading mine, means alot to me!!! |
by Lisa
I absolutely loved this poem so I gave it a 5. I can totally relate to this.. |
by GoodMEMORIES
Very well describing this piece. i think that this poem is unique and beautiful... |
by Cella Bella
I loved the metaphor you used here. You vocab and the way you put it to use is just beautiful. Great imagery and flow here as well. The poem was really original and I think that made it more appealing too. 5/5 |
I really like this poem it is really good i in joyed reading it i will read more of ur poems tomorrow i have to go to school in the mornin so i am getting of nut i promise i will comment some of ur other poems ok but will u comment mine to |