Great work keep it up 5/5....and sorry bout your nanny myne died too on the same day*gasp* omg it was sep. 11th 2001. wow that wicked. ne ways i know what it feels like to lose a loved oneXD

Lovely chloe.
space it out every 6 lines.

should be alright.

the butterfly wings line is gorgeous, leave it alone at the end.

amazing. i LOVE IT.
keep it up :)
x

Hey Nina here
this poem is really sad with so much feeling
you can write and you live in Canada how lucky
please read some of mine :)