Hey this is sooooooo amazingly excellent... I love it so much i would like to put it on my blog so everyone can see it if thats ok with you?? i think its very good and im gonna read some more because you seem like a very good writer keep it up 5/5

Aww.. I totally love this poem it's wonderful. Absolutely great job. My fav part was:
So these scars are just reminders
Of the awful things love has done.
It's broken my heart into a million pieces
And only just for fun
I totally understand what you're saying you can express your feelings very well. Wonderful job. Very touching. Full of emotion.
Nicely done! :)
It's in my favs
5/5
Best wishes
Take care