I liked it very much..though not sure if i like the title of it cause it really only fits the first stanza..but overall i liked how you described the ending of the relationship and the poem seemed to flow well and had feeling to it..keep up the good work!

Unstoppalbe

should be unstoppable

Anyways, I like this. Has a lot of feeling to it. I like how you ended it and explained a little about the relationship. However I do agree with the person above about the title, doesnt quite go with the whole poem, only the first stanza. And on the second stanza I didnt quite get it, I think its just or I'm reading it wrong, I dont know. But overall I liked it. Keep up the good work!

Very nice poem with mournful feelings nicely depicted. The word choice is beautiful and the flow is great. 5.5

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Fsams

I liked it...It was penned really well.
The flow was really good...
The story behind it was really good..
&& I loved the ending.....
Overall 5/5