THis was very interesting and unique poem because of that 4.5 that rounds up to 5 lol

I like this. I think the title is good and just kind of intrigues the reader. It's a very emotional and deep piece. Well done.
4/5

Nice poem which is full of great meanings, this shows you are a great writer.

keep it up

Well, I think the title "A Fine Line" would actually fit this piece.

To many times people step over the line from white to gray on into black without even looking back.

I am actually rendered speechless at this moment while I stand in awe at the beauty you have created in a few strokes.

Honestly, you make writing appear so easy and you are an inspiration to many.

--Sher

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might be a good title
think about it
great poem love it