Comments : Are we friends?

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Aww so sad story. many poeple just can't see how good friends they have...i wish your friend will realize that she has irreplaceable true friend. i like your poem. i like how you act with your best friend i can relate somehow
    good work

  • 17 years ago

    by White Chocolate Dynamite

    Excellant! There were a few misspellings in it, but it was great 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    I really like this poem as it had a clear narrative and voice to it...it's a really heartfelt story and i love the last two lines

    so if this is goodbye then at least have the nerve to say it, don't leave me hanging my heart is crying because your not around anymore