My little friend (Rondel)

by my name is Llama   Aug 20, 2007


I have a little friend that no one else can control
When everyone else leaves she's always by my side
She knows just how I'm feeling deep down inside
The missing piece of the puzzle that makes me whole

Whenever there is trouble she takes on another role
No one else can see her even when she is right beside
I have a little friend that no one else can control
When everyone else leaves she's always by my side

When I'm angry or hurting she knows how to console
But sometimes I get scared, looking for somewhere to hide
There's never anywhere to go; she will always reside
She is always there, ingrained deep within my soul
I have a little friend that no one else can control

A Rondel is a poem consisting of 13 lines. The rhyme scheme is as follows: ABba abAB abbaA. The capitalized letters representing repeated lines.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Nicely penned, vivid descrptions, excellent word choice,Subtle emtions, again you have done a great job, you have talent, and your topics are diffrent, and refreshing, that is a big plus. 5/5 and keep writting, and I will keep reading.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Can I borrow your friend... It is a nice escape in our own world when reality becomes too much for us to handle.

    I like the fact that you are writing different styles and yet you make them all appear so easily. This in itself shows the talent that you posess.

    --Sher

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It was a beautifully penned piece, i loved it. you really make friendship sound beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The variety of poems you have written is so good and this one also stands out. 5/5 for sure and beaytiful lines about friendship :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The variety of poems you have written is so good and this one also stands out. 5/5 for sure and beaytiful lines about friendship :)

    Tc
    Fsams

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