I love the rythem of this poem... I can feel it

Very sweet

Marissa

This is such a wonderful poem! i really loved it .. and i feel the exactly the same way.. its like you opened up my heart and loooked inside it..
i loved your choice of words and your rhyming pattern..
keep up the wonderful work..
P.S. thankyou you for you comment.. and i write poems in algebra.. its reallyy boring =)

To love someone this way is really a true gift
Keep it up

~gIrL~

I thought you really showed true gratitude. :)
I just didnt get what about...?

Hi little bro,

You must love this person a lot!
The words were very well chosen and you poem touched my heart.
Keep up the great work.

5/5 sis

Aww.. how sweet! i love it! great work putting all of ur heart into this poem.. you could see that you used ur emotions in this.. great work protraying this! wonderful work! keep it up!