Daybreak over the ocean

by Somber Esprit   Aug 20, 2007


Daybreak over the ocean,
Peaceful and still,
We lie horizontal, in our quilted world.
The rising sun bathes the room in gold
Encircled by strong, yet gentle arms
Ivory skin, awakened by your touch,
Hot breath brings me to life,
Fire courses through my veins
Your lips, firm, yet tender
Make clear your desire,
I answer,
Trembling body, pressed hard against yours
Our heart beats are one.
Driven onwards, ocean swell prevails,
Emotions alight, spiraling ever higher,
Peak and tumble in a cascade of flaming ecstasy.
Consumed in the moment,
Crashing waves subside,
Until,
The sea is once more becalmed.

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  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Awe. it just an awesome. graet work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat

    Wow. I really really love this poem! It's beautiful. I miss feeling like that.... Anyway....great job! 5/5

    ~Kat~

    P.S. I like your quotes too, especially this one: "I didn't GIVE you my heart...
    But it was yours, the second you said those words."

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Hey this is a gr8 write!!
    liked it very much 5/5.
    can u plz read tangled lovers tie of mine and any of my new poems that u feel compelled to read hehe!!

    will keep looking at some of urs
    tkcare

  • 17 years ago

    by oldthings

    Wow, I really like this,
    "we lie horizontal in our quilted world"
    so cute. gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling to read it. I love the emotions it sends across, the passion, and relating the passion to the strenght and power of the ocean. it was really nice. good job.

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