This was very REAL....good work

Excellent work man keep it up.

Beautiful write!!!
Greatly done.

God bless u

Brilliant poem.... really.

Awww..damn amazing ..coolio flow..really liked it ..did sum really fine job on it.
loved the friendship title tht spoke so clearly on the behalf of so many hearts.. great work

~Wake~

This poem was very well written and it flowed really nicely, too. I think you did a really great job on writing it. You expressed yourself very well. 5/5

~Kristina

Excellently written poem, with a lot of greatly expressed emotions in it. You did absolutely superb job with rhymes, the flow of this poem is perfect!
My favorite lines are:
-Since you didn't want me on your friendship's train
Then why have you put my soul on a chain?
And why have you sealed my heart and brain?
I know no happiness I only know the pain-

Keep up :)
Excellent job!
5/5 from me

Hello my real name is janessa....i really like this poem....keep up the great work ....my friend

Wow this is really deep. Great job. Very expressive. Keep it up. 5/5

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe!!
I can really realte to this poem
I once got through the samething with my best friend

Hope u feel good now;)
~gIrL~

Hi sweetie,
Love your poem but the last line...shouldn't it be like this:
Can't you see how hard it will be for me now to be happy again?
Well, see for yourself it's a beautiful poem anyway!
5/5 from your sis lol

The rhymes are great. Surely amazed me!!!

Beautiful poem
I reallu like it

I can't say, but it's greatest poem I ever read! Beauitful written! Strongly emotion and sadly word went through amazing. You're awesome! U are so pure writtterrr! I love it a lot!!

"Can't you see how much pain you made me gain?
Can't you see how hard for me now to be happy again?" - great lines

i love your wording. its so moving and refreshing. your an amazing writer!!

xx
Taegan Emily

Omg these feelings are soo strong... great poem5/5

Wow...well expressed pain...really nice...hope things get better wit you..

I really like this poem it's really good. 5/5 Keep up the good work. Comment some of my poems!! Thanks Neely

Great poem. i love the rhyming at the end of every line, very unique

Very emotional poem. Good Job!