Wow.. Your good at writing... please continue

This an amazing poem.

Keep it up buddie.

Jadee.

:)

Almost scary, it's so sad. I like the metaphor you used. Def. adding you as a favorite.

You were my addiction,
and to your sweet drug I'm still loyal.
though the high I used to feel,
is replaced with numbing sorrow.

fav lines

thx for takin time to read my poem, wow lots of help there, I actually wrote it like that for a reason, when I write it's kinda like a diary, not meant to be correct or really structured. i'm torn between the then and now between two people. not that a reader knows that. but I do :) when I get some time to breathe here ill fix it up and add a bunch to it. thanks again!

Oh I just loved the second stanza. You wrote it so beautifully and it flowed effortlessly. The imagery here was effective and kept my attention. This was my fave of the two .. you really captured me in the beginning and blew me away in the end. Well done *5/5*

I like this like the other ones...you could go far withy our poetry...you really know how to capture someones attention with your writing..you have a true gift..you make my writing look bad..lol