by Fr0g PrincE Aug 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Daylight's passed, life's a hidden thread of dancing candle fire |
by mier
Wow... You're such a brilliant poet.. The poems you write are more than amazing.. Written with such depths and intense imagination.. The flow of words and the description leaves me speechless... Keep writting.. Oh, and a 5/5 for you... :) |
by OHgreenman
Deep piece...like the word usage and simple rhymes. Well penned... |
by Bogie
The first stanza took me as being |
by Angie
The title really caught my eye and I just had to read this one and I'm glad I did. Its very emotional. Not sure what others will get out of it, I'm sure everyone will have their own thoughts on it, but to me it portrays the life of a son/sons and they have died at war. It's very sad. Well done! |
ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE. |