WOW!! this is freaking amazing....i love it... this is a wonderful idea for a poem...i've never seen it done before..

it flowed nicely and rhyming was on point.

excellent job... 5/5 from me. =]

This is wonderful. I love it. 5/5

I read this the other day and just forgot to comment on it, but I am glad that you listed it in the one for me to comment this time because I fell in love with it then and fell harder now lol.

"We're riding phone lines, just to see what we can find"

^^ That line, wow. I don`t know how to explain how much I love it.

"So let's take this plunge and we'll hold our breath;
I'm not afraid to admit that I'm scared half to death "

^^ Dear, seriously. If you EVER and I mean EVER start to doubt your talent as a poet; I`m going to hire a hitman lmao.

I love this poem. Your imagery was great, same with the wording...so many people will be able to relate to this. Keep up the good work. :]

5.5
heartchuu.
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