This is a good poem!! I like how you repeated, You can, in your poem.
keep writing
peace
soffe

I really enjoyed reading this poem :)

The flow was good and the repetition in the lines worked really well. I really liked the ending, it gave a good twist at the end.

Keep it up!

Amy x

Some places, some fields your expressions goes in an attractive manner which I can't describe you. So with one words I say that you have professional ideas of writing more lovely poems and that I will be looking forward same.. 5/5

Nazeer

Jag blev glad ner jag leste denna... very nice...