by Wake
Amazing.. somebody has to say it.. and you said it.. |
by Aisha
Short n sweet! a message to all! 5/5 |
by Blease
Short but very effective.....great work |
by Ajmal
I dont know..when i started reading it and when its ended.. |
by Fan Angeleo
This is a wonderful poem, it opens up your eyes to the most important things in life, honesty, love and so much more, keep working on them "girl" there are nice. |
This poem is true but false at the same time, because You can have more then one of those for the same person, To love is to care for someone, some times you trick that person (not ment as a bad thing just like playing a prank), your poem is true but the one part you should think about is A person to Hate, the world would be a much better place if people could stop the hate and pain cause your just hurting more people by hating hate only leads to more hate, as Gandhi said The weak can not forgive forgivenes is an act of the strong, ok to be honnest I hate people to but those people are not good people, If your gonna hate someone have a good reason like me I hate my ex's bf not cause she is dating him but because he called her names, Hate for the right reasons, abuse, rudeness, hurting others, a man even thinking of hitting a girl or women, And sick bastard who would think of hurting a child,and all the other horribly things like rape, or peer presseure, feel free to make your choices dont let anyone pressure you into them, Over all its a great poem but thats just what it made me thing about and is that not what poems are for to invock thoughts or feelings in the reader? lol well good poem keep it up., |
by Fear2love
Short, but makes a point |
Someone to love |
by Gness
I like it simple yet true |
by noha
So sweet i love it alot nice work |