Comments : Someone

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    Amazing.. somebody has to say it.. and you said it..

    short yet makes you realize.. AMAZING.

    loved it !

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by Aisha

    Short n sweet! a message to all! 5/5

    AIsha

  • 17 years ago

    by Blease

    Short but very effective.....great work

    Blease:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Ajmal

    I dont know..when i started reading it and when its ended..
    but..it makes a big impression on my heart..
    well done..

  • 17 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    This is a wonderful poem, it opens up your eyes to the most important things in life, honesty, love and so much more, keep working on them "girl" there are nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by James Weatherbee

    This poem is true but false at the same time, because You can have more then one of those for the same person, To love is to care for someone, some times you trick that person (not ment as a bad thing just like playing a prank), your poem is true but the one part you should think about is A person to Hate, the world would be a much better place if people could stop the hate and pain cause your just hurting more people by hating hate only leads to more hate, as Gandhi said The weak can not forgive forgivenes is an act of the strong, ok to be honnest I hate people to but those people are not good people, If your gonna hate someone have a good reason like me I hate my ex's bf not cause she is dating him but because he called her names, Hate for the right reasons, abuse, rudeness, hurting others, a man even thinking of hitting a girl or women, And sick bastard who would think of hurting a child,and all the other horribly things like rape, or peer presseure, feel free to make your choices dont let anyone pressure you into them, Over all its a great poem but thats just what it made me thing about and is that not what poems are for to invock thoughts or feelings in the reader? lol well good poem keep it up.,

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Short, but makes a point

  • Someone to love
    someone to hate

    That is a fine line isn't it? I need to find someone like you describe too.... but I've given up and if their is someone like that... they better just fall in my lap because otherwise... I disbelieve love exists

  • 16 years ago

    by Gness

    I like it simple yet true

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    So sweet i love it alot nice work