by David b Aug 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I love your warm smile and your kind thoughtful way, |
by TyrantxTia
Awee this is so cute!! |
Aww this was a very nice poem 5/5 |
I liked it, short and sweet, but it lost the flow in the last line of the 2nd stanza with "grow and grow". To me, it would sound better replacing the first grow with another word. But hey, that's just me and I don't usually use a rhyming style. LOL |