by Wallace Aug 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Watch me end my love for you and everything you meant |
by Nix
Very interesting, it is short but very powerful. You again expressed emotions greatly. This piece is simple but very effective. |
This is a great poem! It flowed really well=] |
by ECILA ice
Wow! honestly, this poem is short but still love the simplicty of your words and the emotions being held up between those lines. great job! |
by Fsams
Very beautiful poem. The wordings are great and the meaning is great and lucid. I liked the structure and you have very well penned. 5/5 |
Ive never written an acrostic but i like this one 4/5 nice |