by Bre Monique Aug 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
The rain pours outside and the fire glows inside |
by Marc Ortiz
I like the imagery in this poem. But you have some errors in this piece, some sentences need to have punctuations. Also I think to improve this poem you should work with the structure of it. |
Awwwww.... That is a great poem right there!! You put so much emotion in it, it is so sweet!!!!! 5/5 |
by Stephanie
Ok, this poem, totally hot. |
by Ajmal
Wow..iam speechless... |
by Saul
This is incredible! Such a deep enticing poem on all levels! |