Nice piece... you know what? the most important thing is that the words came out within you... and that's the real thing... keep writing more poems and be the best that you can be...

That one was so cute and actually very true =P The flow was fantastic as it had it's very own and once again the emotions were great also =) Another perfect 5 ^_^
Rhea

*by the way thank you for the great comment on my poem =) I really like that one of mine also and is one of my better love ones looking back lols*