by Rose not your average Aug 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I wish I could write about something happy. |
Your poems are sad, but |
by HUGIYDAWY
This is an emotional poem. |
by Corruption
Great poem |
by Ciao Bella
Wow so much emotion in this poem its amazing |
Pretty good..it had good flow...a bit repetitive in places but i could feel the emotions and the struggle the person is having...good write..keep it up! |