I'm going through the same thing...guys are so hard to read sometimes and you care for them and will do anything for them and you just want to give up or make them realize what theyre missing out on...i really enjoyed this poem..hopefully guys will read this and maybe understand us girls alittle bit more..lol=]

I can totally relate to this, I went through the same thing a while ago. Don't worry though, it gets better. Good job on the poem, though.

Very sad and very deep. Keep on writing guys are reading, great poem.

Unstoppable desire!!!!!!! good work keep it up..