Tomorrow you'll be gone.

by Aimee   Aug 20, 2007


My biggest fear tonight is that tomorrow you will be gone
Because without you here to help me I dont think I can go on
If you give up on yourself then it means iv let you down
It means I failed to show you how much I want you to stick around
Your death will hit me hard and the tears will fall like rain
Nothing will be able to comfort me nothing will cure the pain
In one last attempt to save you just let me say
If you take this leap of freedom tomorrow i'll do the same
I scream in desperation until i lose my voice
know you make it for both of us when you make this final choice
cause I cant go on living without your halo as my guide
so ill meet you at the gates to the almighty flip side.

I wrote this poem for my friend when she was really upset and wanted to die.

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  • 14 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Your poem is over flowing with power. Wow. This write is intense with love for your friend. I have not much else to say, I am speechless. Your poem is just, powerful.

  • 16 years ago

    by dora

    Aww this poem was very touching, a sad write, i cant imagine how u much feel when your in that position.
    great use of words and ur flow was really good. good job, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by adrian

    Wat can i said i have read alot of poems but they were nothing like this i felt every bit of it i loved the way u did this

    nice work keep it up
    wardy

  • 17 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Very emotional and deep that came from the heart. ur friend should feel so lucky 2 have some1 that cares 4 her so much

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cara

    Woah. u and ur friend must be pretti close. ur rhyming helped to express ur emotion which was good. nice. xx

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