Longing 4 u~!

by Trent   Aug 21, 2007


Her eyes are like diamonds that shine in the sun,
Her lips so perfect for the unimaginable perfect kiss,
The beauty of her face consumes me,
Her skin so soft an tender,
The figure of her body makes me squirm up inside, how can it be so perfectly created,
She is so kind an sweet with a touch of innocence,
Theres only one word for her, Amazing!

Its so hard to believe she is so amazing,

I long to feel her warm an inviting embrace,
My heart crys her name with a desire of lust,

When I'm around her i hold back the passion to open up myself to her,

Knowing that if i do that there shall be consequences,

She brings me to life, gives me that energy to keep going,

She brought me back from the dead an i owe it to her,
I was down an out an there she was,
Somehow we where brought together,

Everything i say she deserves.

She might or might not know yet how i feel but only time can tell.

From here on, i don't know what happens.
Its totally in her hands, an i hope she feels the same.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    WonderfuL! excellenT! mE luV diS writinG. keeP uP yR gooDS worK..

    goD blesS yoU....

    >>>>>luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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    Nazeer

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    MarvelouS writinG, lonG feelingS, prettY gooD expressionS, happY iN commentinG.. yoU deservE 4 a gooD writinG... 5/5

    luzaN

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ExpressionS arE lovelY...5/5

    luzaN