Nice poem...flowed nicely and rhyming was good....life is sometimes grand and we never really take the chance to realize it..

good job.5/5

It was an ok poem..though parts i didnt feel like it flowed very well and didnt quite fit the norms of poetry..but thats the fun part..i could feel the emotions and i liked how you wrote about all the feelings that one can have and put it into one poem...keep up the good work

Amie

Kweppy made this poem look hmm it lost my focus. but it was good the flow was disturbed many times easy to fix. it was still filled with emotion though which is what i look for, its poetry. 5/5