Comments : The day my heart stops beating

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey
    Wonderful poem.

    So for now I won't worry
    I won't even shed no tears
    Because so far you've given me a love
    That has prove can last for years

    This is what I hope you find for yourself hun. That once in a lifetime love.
    Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful Chelz, I wish you much love and happiness and if tears are shed may they be happy ones!!

  • 17 years ago

    by FireCracker

    HEY GIRL! BOY HAS IT BEEN AWHILE but I gotta tell ya this was an awesome one to come back to and read.. YOUVE STILL GOT IT, just like I knew you would! Gr8 work! uggh i really need to start up the writing but ive been so busy. lol but i loved this one.. and just had to tell ya and say hey!

  • 17 years ago

    by FireCracker

    HEY GIRL! BOY HAS IT BEEN AWHILE but I gotta tell ya this was an awesome one to come back to and read.. YOUVE STILL GOT IT, just like I knew you would! Gr8 work! uggh i really need to start up the writing but ive been so busy. lol but i loved this one.. and just had to tell ya and say hey!