Hahahahahaahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahaha sorry had to do that. lol uhmm this is one of my favorites too because well i hate her too =) lol uhmm anyways about the poem and all. i rated 4/5 because in a few parts it kinda went off flow but yeahh its still good and enjoyable :]

This poem was interesting, The flow seemed to lack a bit throughout it and completely went off within the second stanza. The anger which you portrayed was quite strong due to your harsh word choice. It was funny in its own way and definitly gave me a little smile =] So a good effort. ~mel

Haha the violence in this poem scared me half to death lol good thing i'm not your cousin I guess lol Excellent job 5/5 GG23

The envy and jealousy depicted in this piece really reflects the ironic love you have for your cousin and I know there are reasons as you have mentioned. Its poetic and good

Tc
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Well i think this poem is great you can feel the tension as you read it
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I thought the flow was good, and it read well. yet i was shocked at the way you talk about your cousin, it isnt the best poem because of those reasons, i think it was just too cruel.
love Tara-Kay
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