by Michelle18 Aug 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
She has so many selfish ways, |
by lish
Yess i can also realte to this one very well written you can just feel the meaning |
by Marc Ortiz
It was an okay poem. I like the other one better. What I like in this poem is.. It is true.. our older siblings always think they're better than us. (Not sure if she's older than you) |
I like thiz one...ur sister bogus u should get sumbody to teach her a lesson...dont listen to her ur fine |
Well i really like the poem and the idea..i even wrote about a selfish friend in one of my poems...but one of the stanzas I didn't quite like..the 4th one..it just didnt seem to flow like the others...but overall a great job and I can understand how you feel..keep it up! |
by K3LSI3
I liked it.your sister shouldnt treat you like that.its not right.great job. |