Okay this is definetly one of my favorites!! because well..its about your sister and i hate her so yeah :] haha great job.

Lol, I love the dedicated to my sister. Lmao thats hilarious. Darn I cant stop laughing. Ok I'm done. Ok I like the title, the opening was great, although I think you used the word 'she' too much. But great ending, nice work.

I liked it.your sister shouldnt treat you like that.its not right.great job.

Well i really like the poem and the idea..i even wrote about a selfish friend in one of my poems...but one of the stanzas I didn't quite like..the 4th one..it just didnt seem to flow like the others...but overall a great job and I can understand how you feel..keep it up!

I like thiz one...ur sister bogus u should get sumbody to teach her a lesson...dont listen to her ur fine

It was an okay poem. I like the other one better. What I like in this poem is.. It is true.. our older siblings always think they're better than us. (Not sure if she's older than you)

But anyway.. I can really relate to this poem.. coz my sister always thinks she's right, lol.

Keep up the good work!

Yess i can also realte to this one very well written you can just feel the meaning
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