This was a wonderful poem, I especially loved the ending. All your poems are great, keep up the good work!! And thanks for all your sweet comments on my poems, I REALLY appreciated them.

5/5 on this one tho :)

Excellent work once more girl! You keep knocking 'em out like this and it's incredible. I don't know how you do this. But you keep making it work. The flow was perfect (despite you saying in the poem you didn't care if it was off), and the word choice is classic. There are too many stanzas that stand out to put them all in here, but great job! :)
~Midnight Sun