by Michelle18 Aug 21, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Stab me in the heart, |
by Mister 47
I wish you can hit my heart now and rip it in 2 |
by Mister 47
Still enjoying readin it , it was a great one really touch me inside , it si my faorite one!!! |
by Empathy
I found your rhythm is this poem brilliant! It allows the poem to flow very well and your emotion is clearly expressed within in it as well. Nice work! |
by Mister 47
I will add this to my favorite |
by Mister 47
Very good one , i can feel the sorrow and lost |