WOW!!! this poem is great. 10/10. lol.

Buetiful flow,like:Stab me in the heart,
Rip it in two.
Tear me apart,
Make your wish come true

Wow!!! i love this!! the repetition! it just adds soo much more emotion. the flow was good and the word choice was perfect. good job=] im glad i read it

Very good one , i can feel the sorrow and lost

nice one

I will add this to my favorite

I found your rhythm is this poem brilliant! It allows the poem to flow very well and your emotion is clearly expressed within in it as well. Nice work!

Still enjoying readin it , it was a great one really touch me inside , it si my faorite one!!!

great work i wish i can vote again for you
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I wish you can hit my heart now and rip it in 2