I've tried to many times to read the outer door,
`to = too
Minor mistake (: Anyway, Brittnay,
You truly have a way with words. When I first read the title, I thought this would be cliche, but you gave the title its justice. From my view, the poem just radiates with a great message. The first line, to the very last sentence -- the whole thing was just beautiful . The ending was gorgeous, btw.
I haven't read anything like it. How you started it -- interesting thought & image to place in a readers head, but the ending? Masterpiece. I don't have words for it,
It all just tied together flawlessly.
"Quietly I'm going to conform to a world of harsh realities,
And this mind will not conquer the silence, but embrace it."
Beautifully simple, real words to live by.