Excellent!

i like the concept, and the ideas, very descriptive!

keep it up!

Great piece. Though there is some spelling errors..sometimes that adds to a persons flare. The flow was great and I liked how you ended it. It was different. The emotion was definitely felt. Keep it up!

Awesome poem, god that sucks if you went through that im soo sorry.! your poem had meaning and it was as if you wrote it with anger and i think its awesome! good job! check out some of my poems please!

Wow. I dont know wether it was more dark or more sad. What else to say. Um........ It was a huge flood of emotion, I really enjoyed it though. It was incredible, It's been about five minutes since I read this and Im still in awe, Great work.