Short but cute. I loved it. Still, I agree with trying to hold on. It may become a great poem if you would work on it and make it longer. Keep it up anyways.
5/5
take care
~Kitten~

Another sweetly written short piece. Can't explain how much I have enjoyed reading these 3 Goran. Again amazing. Well done on these 3 latest pieces I have read by you. You are truely gifted. ~mel

Short, sweet and full of emotion/

5/5 well done :)

Sweet poem....another great poem written by an amazing poet....your short poems seem to leave me in awe.....nice job. 5/5

This is so powerful

Awww so heartfelt i really loved this poem, another beautiful and amazing write for you goran. wouldn't expect anything less, great job.

Wow, the power of this piece lays in its simplicity, you said so much with so little words, truly beautifully written love poem. You are very talented poet. This piece is really amazing, filled with emotions.
Well done, 5/5 from me

Sometimes a smiple thing or person can be your cure and I hope she will cure you. short but sweet and received the message. dast xosh